Awesome job for a first attempt on this picture. The skin tone looks great, you've got great DOF going on in the shot and it really comes together. For the touchup I like the hair color, you made it pop a little more, the brightening of the face is pretty amazing and you managed to take out the shadow going across her face for the most part. My only critique would have to be the skin smoothing, it's a little too much for me personally. I like seeing a litte bit of skin texture still in there. I think the wrinkle reducer looks great but I think the age lines under the eyes need a little more presence along with a little darkness as well so you can tell that it's more 3 dimensional. It really does look great and I'm sure she's thrilled with it.